Sales Pages, Scams, and the Really Great Deal Difference
Since I’ve experienced both sides of the sales/scammer fence, I can tell you that they essentially use the same principles and tools for a fraud as they do for a really great deal. But it’s how they use it and what they’re after that counts.
- A scammer simply wants the most amount of money for the least amount of effort. They deal in one-off’s and want you only for a sale – which to them is only a numbers-game. They just want your money. They don’t care about you.
- An honest and valuable service-provider is interested in your welfare and wants you as a continuing client. These guys don’t really care about the gimmicks and know that even if you only buy from them once, your honest recommendation will bring more people to them who they can honestly help.
Now, I wrote the basics of copywriting over at my book-blog at Online Sunshine Plan.
And there’s far more to it in the Online Sunshine Plan book, available at Lulu.com
But I haven’t laid out anywhere what goes into a sales page and the difference that makes it a scam – so here goes:
Key point:
They are using your emotions, feelings, and attitudes to get what they want.
95% of the average humankind person operates mostly on subconscious reactions. If they can get you to “think” about something, especially in thinking with your feelings, they can get you to react in their favor.
Will Rogers was talking about modern advertising and sales pages when he said they are just, “getting people to buy things they don’t want with money they don’t have.”
Here’s the rough layout of most sales pages:
- Headline
- Greeting
- Bullet Points
- Exciting transition paragraph
- More Bullet Points
- An exciting testimonial or two or three about your book
- More Bullet Points
- An incredible guarantee
- A free bonus if they buy your book today
- An easy way to buy your product
- Your close
- A P.S.
Go ahead, open up a new tab or a new window and see if this isn’t true. Check out some sales pages. The majority of them follow this exact scene. Some are longer than others. Some have found that “interactive” videos help make the sale these days.
The headlines, bullet points, and testimonials – all the copywriting, actually – are all about “features” which again are always based in the key points which people use to get sales (and I quote from my Cialdini and Levenson Scam-free pages):
1. Reciprocation
2. Commitment and consistency
3. Social proof
4. Liking
5. Authority
6. Scarcity
- The need or want for security.
- The need or want for approval.
- The need or want for control, or to escape control.
These are all the buttons which are being used to get you to act on their offers.
When you look at these pages, they are all telling you how great you will feel, how people will look up to you, how everyone around you has one, how such-and-such celebrity or professor recommends it, etc. etc.
The difference between a really good deal and a scam
There are some things to look for, and some to look out for.
First, most people are wising up to this. They look for social recommendations – just like people always have. What’s the word of mouth on this product? Reviews, listings on the complaint boards, etc. Now this can also be booby-trapped if that product or service has an affiliate sales network. For many products, if you look up the company product, followed by “scam” or “fraud” then you’ll find a nice sales page disguised as an honest review of the product. And the links are affiliate links. So the page author can make some money if you sign up through them.
Get on some discussion boards and check these out. Again, there are people who exist in life just to be critical of others, no matter how good they or their products are. And some websites only act as consumer complaint sites, but actually are shaking down the people who are mentioned on their sites (RipOff Reports – Wikipedia article). However, the bulk of them are straight. A rough rule of thumb is if they are 50% or better with actual good reports, then they aren’t scamming.
(The most pathetic sites I’d ever seen were where scammers were actually offering Internet Coaching to unsuspecting people. Once they educated people how to research on the Internet, they found out they were getting scammed and then posted to their new blogs how bad that company had ripped them off. Then they went to the complaint boards and really let loose. Idiot scammers.)
Second, they will actually offer you a trial version for nothing, except maybe postage. Now, beware of this like the devil. You can easily (as I have, with a company called Bid-Fuel) who will send you a mostly useless CD and then in fine print tell you that they are going to be billing you monthly for access to their site (which is also useless). And then they sell your name and number to other sales floors who will then sell you some over-priced online training from a service provider. But you will keep getting phone calls, as they sell your name over and over and over and over. (Use my stop telemarketer recipe to get them to quit if this has happened to you.)
A decent company won’t ask you for your phone number and will actually tell them that they aren’t going to use your credit card or give your name to anyone else. (Why do people need your phone number unless they are going to call you, anyway?)
But again, you can Google their “free offer” and see if others have found it useful.
The key differences between valid businesses and scammers
Key points for valid businesses:
They have overwhelming favorable comments and you can try their free product with no strings attached.
Key points for scammers:
They are overwhelmingly criticized and at best will give you a discounted intro which you then have to cancel.
Otherwise, they both use essentially the same sales pages.
Here’s a PLR article I found which gives more on how this whole sales page system works:
1. The header/graphic block
HEL-LO!! The opening graphic should grab your visitor by the eyeballs and plunge him or her into your site. Its primary purpose is to get your visitor to read your opening headline.2. The testimonial / credentials block
Who is this guy and what is he offering? This block promises BIG BENEFITS – enough to keep your visitor reading. Make this as powerful as you can, but a word of caution – you’re going to have to justify that claim later.3. The informational block
Tell your visitor what problem you’re solved for them.4. The product introduction block
Here is where you point out (in general terms) how your product can cure their problems.5. The benefits block
In this block, you build on the benefits that your product brings, this time, item-by-item. Bullets are useful here.6. The call to action block
Here’s where you first ask for the sale. And here’s where you give a time deadline (plus a reason for the deadline). Make sure there is an easy method of ordering, even at this early stage. If not earlier, here’s a simple form or link which takes them to a sales page.7. The guarantee block
Here’s where you place it your guarantee. If you use Clickbank, they have ample guarantees you can quote. It reinforces the visitor’s growing need to buy and reassures them.8. The bonuses block
Now throw in some great bonuses you’re going to give them. Also include the actual value of what you’d pay to get these separately.9. The action summary block
Here’s where you ask for the sale – clearly and without hesitation. This is really what you want to ask from the beginning. But the earlier blocks enable this one to work. Make sure your customer knows the price and you tell her what is expected now. Make sure there’s no doubt what their next action should be.10. The postscript block
Like any good sales letter you should add a postscript. Your visitors will be sure to read two things: the heading and the postscript. This is where you should shine. It’s your last chance to give a light shove to anyone still teetering on the edge.
So it’s no real difference to the sales format, but you can tell the subtle differences – something which should keep you away from scammers for the most part.
You also have to know that the testimonial portion can be faked easily. I’ve seen testimonials which were made up out of whole cloth and sounded very convincing. The other point: a lot of these companies have about 1 in 100,000 who actually are outrageous successes. These are the guys who appear on the video’s and infomercials with the rave success stories. What the don’t tell you is that about 10,000 people actually “make money” with that product. Meaning 99,000 people were scammed and lost money. And these are actual statistics I got from people who have worked for those scammers.
You’ve got a wire-thin road to follow at first. But once you get the hang of how to find out what’s real and what’s fake, you’ll be astonished – at least I was – when you see that 97% of what’s out there in Internet Marketing is bunk.
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